Oma's portrait
 

This is a posthumous portrait I did of my monther-in-law. It is titled, "Tot Ziens" which means "see you later" in Dutch, something she often said to us.

This painting was done from a photograph, but I sketched her often when she was alive. She was a very patient model.

Hi Peggi,

I really like the interesting way you've changed your Oma's face compared to the photo. Your portrait is much more immediate, with interesting angles/planes. It feels fresh, like you painted with her sitting there. It's clear that you are comfortable with portraying her face, sinceyou can do slight distortions that add to rather than distract from the character being portrayed. I like the radiating lines of the composition that you've added in.

The only thing I'd consider is possibly darkening the background slightly in the lighter areas to our right, at her left shoulder. If you put your finger over that one lighter blotch, you may decide that a darker value may help pull that area backwards in space more.

Thank you Julie. I see what o umean by the "blotch" on the right. It does look distracting now that you've pointed it out. I greatly appreciate the feedback.

Carlos,
Thanks so much for you comment. This was one of my favorite portraits, possible because of the connection I feel with her.

Very good work, Peggy! The likeness is incredible...it always helps to have done the model from life several times before taking on the photo. I especially like the way the hair was resolved.
Congratulations!

This is beautiful Peggi. It has such a peaceful, angelic feel to it. I thought it a watercolor at first glance since it has that sort of freshness about it.