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Julie Deane 06-07-2009 10:04 PM

Portrait by the water
 
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Hi,

Just want to share a recently completed commission.

Marvin Mattelson 06-07-2009 11:37 PM

Hi Julie,

Great job! I think this is your finest work. You should be proud of your growth.

Julie Deane 06-07-2009 11:51 PM

Thanks, Marvin. Slowly but surely...I'm continuing to plug away at it.

Terri Ficenec 06-08-2009 12:13 AM

Hi Julie,
This is wonderful -- you've captured the feel of sunlight on skin beautifully! and the water and landscape behind him is nicely done too :)

Julie Deane 06-08-2009 09:07 AM

Thanks, Terri.

Marvin Mattelson 06-08-2009 10:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Julie Deane
Thanks, Marvin. Slowly but surely...I'm continuing to plug away at it.

If you stay aware of the principles that guided the great artists your path will continue to be revealed.

Alexandra Tyng 06-08-2009 12:41 PM

Julie, I'm so impressed! Not only is this a masterful portrait, the landscape behind it is magnificent.

First, the figure. I like how he's looking of, not at the viewer, but at something else, maybe his surroundings or maybe he's deep in thought and just gazing absently. The light and shadow colors and values on his skin are just right! I also love the placement of the figure.

As for the landscape, again the colors and values are extraordinarily true -to-life. The colors are harmonious with the figure, but subdued so that the figure stands out. It appears to be a particular place, but you have not given in to too much detail. The rock he's standing on is a great lead-in to the water and shore.

A work of art!

Julie Deane 06-08-2009 12:51 PM

Thanks, Marvin. I greatly appreciated the lessons I learned in your workshop, and am endeavoring to keep them in mind.

By the way, I finally get to visit the Met this summer, and will be thinking of your lecture "Everything I know about Painting I learned at the Met" as I visit!

Julie Deane 06-08-2009 01:03 PM

Wow, thanks, Alexandra,

I worked hard on the composition, using what Juliette Aristides calls the "Armature of the Rectangle". Patty Joyce saw my original oil sketch and can testify that there was a noticeable improvement in composition using those design principles.

I used this color palette:
2 blues: cobalt and manganese
2 reds: alizarin crimson and cadmium
2 yellows: naples dark and yellow ochre
1 black: ivory black
Raw umber

Oh, and a touch of gold ochre in the hair. I am a believer in choosing a color palette according to what I think the painting needs.

I feel that I could have put more crispness and value contrast into the rocks, but I am pleased overall, so thank you.

Mike Dodson 06-08-2009 03:21 PM

I love this. The edges are modeled beautifully. This piece is very pleasing to the eye. My favorite of yours by far!


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