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Devin Cramer 09-17-2002 02:13 PM

Triple of Alex
 
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Just finished this of my daughter. I would like to know what you think. Is this professional looking enough? I'm always concerned that my work look professional.

Jennifer Geary 09-18-2002 06:26 PM

Hi Devin,

I think the drawings are great! However, I would have moved the bottom portrait a bit to the right...to balance it better on the bottom. Other than that, it is very professional work! Looks good, and cute little girl!

Jen

Devin Cramer 09-18-2002 07:01 PM

Jen

Thanks, I agree with your assesment on the composition and the cuteness of the little girl.

I'm pretty fond of her myself.

Devin

Carolyn Ortiz 09-19-2002 12:42 PM

Devin,

I really like your drawing quality! I also would have mentioned about moving the faces closer together. Another thing is the signature. It may be better to move it closer to the figures. At this point it may stand out a bit, and distract from the flow of the piece.

I especially like the face that is to the viewer's right. It is a beautiful pose! And the flesh tones seem richer and warmer in that one.

Devin Cramer 09-19-2002 10:24 PM

Carolyn,

Thanks, I agree I should have put the 3 closer together and my name does stand out a little too much. Lucky this is for myself and not a client.

I've liked the work you have posted, you are farther along than I was at your age. Keep up the good work.

Devin


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