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Mike Dodson 06-10-2004 07:24 AM

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I took this photo of my niece last night. The inspiration for this type of lighting came as a result of studying some of Henry Raeburn's work recently. I wanted to do a painting with strong lighting against a dark back-ground. What do you think?

Marvin Mattelson 06-10-2004 10:20 AM

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Hi Mike.

Very interesting. beautiful color and clarity. What camera did you use and what type of light?

However, I think that if you are trying to emulate Raeburn you might want to rethink a few points. The shadows are too dark. Remember the Raeburns you see reproduced are far more contrasty than the originals due to the photo process. I have seen many originals so please take my word.

Secondly, he never would have the nose shadow so extended as to touch the cheek (and never the upper lip either). Very unflattering in the case of a young girl. In fact he often had the shadow plane on the side of the face turned away from the viewer.

See some examples below.

Mike Dodson 06-10-2004 11:00 AM

Marvin,

Thanks so much for the response. The camera I use is an Olympus C-4000 4.0 mega-pixel. The lighting I used is a single fluorescent screw in type bulb. I used a reflector on the shadow side but didn't light the shadow side quiet as much as I desired. I may try some things in photoshop to see if it can be improved.

Thanks for the Raeburn references. We have one here in Birmingham that is simply stunning. The soft, glowing effect his paintings have are quite breath-taking.The shadow side on the painting is quite dark but not as dark as I have here. The point you make concerning the nose is a good one and one that didn't catch my eye. I may try shooting another photo and see if I can lighten those shadows a bit. I may also try the lighting from the opposite side and throw that shadow back the opposite direction as you have mentioned.

Linda Brandon 06-10-2004 03:09 PM

Mike and Marvin, I will be watching this thread carefully, as I am also a big Raeburn fan and have played around with his lighting setups.

Mike, please ask your gorgeous niece to lose the t-shirt and find something with a wonderful neckline, scoop or v-neck, that will reflect skin (or fabric) color up under her chin. As long as you're doing this exercise, make this a fabulous painting where you can show off your talent to its utmost.

Mike Dodson 06-10-2004 04:02 PM

Thanks for the input Linda. I'm going to photograph her again this week-end. We will certainly work with different clothing to see what looks best.

Mike Dodson 06-11-2004 07:02 AM

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My gracious model came by for another photo shoot. Here are the latest:

Marvin Mattelson 06-11-2004 10:44 AM

Mike, much better, and I think this would make a fine painting.

However, now the shadows are too light for Raeburnesque values. The fill light is too powerful and/or too close.

In the same vein, he wouldn't have the shadow cast by the nose intersect the head's side plane shadow.

Mike McCarty 06-11-2004 11:05 AM

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Hi Mike,

I'm a fan of the second one.

Certain little things catch my eye, and it might just be me so disregard if they don't strike you the same way. I rounded off her closest shoulder just a bit. On the bottom right I shaved an inch or so off her blouse, and more less completed the "V" neck. She looks a little thinner and streamlined to me. Small matters.

Mike Dodson 06-11-2004 11:19 AM

Marvin,

Thanks again for the response.

I think the shadows on this photo may be a little closer to the first Raeburn painting you posted. I think I can darken the shadows a bit once I get into the painting. I think I should be able to shorten the cast shadow off the nose also. I really am going for that soft edge, glowing effect of Raeburn's. I am going back to the museum in a few hours to study and take a few photo's of the Raeburn painting here in Birmingham.

As far as the two photo's, I must now decide which one to use. I'm leaning toward #1 due to the face being brighter on the lighted side. I let to get some input as to preference.

Mike Dodson 06-11-2004 11:23 AM

Mike,

I like the modifications you made. Those subtle changes make a powerful impact on the overall composition. Now I'm totally undecided!

Chuck Yokota 06-11-2004 11:39 AM

Mike,
I like #2. With the hair pulled back over her near shoulder, there is clearer connection of the head with the body. I don't know if it's an optical illusion or not, but the head in the other photo looks a bit thrust forward. In all the photos, I also wish her expression were a bit happier.

Mike McCarty 06-11-2004 12:27 PM

Mike,

Not to discount Marvin's observations, but of the two here, number one has a posture issue as Chuck points out. The hair is also a plus in #2, and #2 suggests a longer (more flattering for women), more elegant gesture.

Good luck, Mike

Marvin Mattelson 06-11-2004 02:15 PM

Number two is far superior compositionally. To me anyway. If I were you I would re-shoot it now keeping #2 in mind, while moving the main light a bit to my right. Not only does the nose shadow protrude too far to the side plane, the nose also casts an unflattering shadow on her cheek which darkens her far eye. Raeburn kept the shadows apart to separate the front plane from the side for a more sculptural effect. Of course then you could also lower the shadow value.

I think the most important thing is to start out with a winning pose and lighting that has the value arrangement which best serves your intentions. If you go in saying I need to change this or adjust that, your consciousness is already compromised. One great lesson I learned from both Paxton and Sargent was that they were fastidious in their setups, even to the point in having costumes custom made for their subjects.

I recently purchased a small canon printer which makes 4 x 6 dye sub prints directly from a pict bridge capable camera (my nikon D70). I can actually print out my photo directly on the spot to show to the client and of course review myself. The printer is very compact. Slightly larger size printers that make 4 x 6 inkjet prints are also available from epson and hp. The point is that you can make instant corrections, re-shooting on the spot. Errors are hard to pick out on a tiny LCD screen.

I have said this before, but in my estimation too many people are working from bad and insufficient reference materials which reduces the chance of one's success geometrically. I also feel people should study the lighting that the masters employed. There is a reason they are masters, after all. Something that works in a photo my not necessarily translate well to a painting.

Mike Dodson 06-11-2004 02:51 PM

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Thanks to all of you for your comments. This will turn out to be a great learning experience for myself and hopefully to others viewing. I'll take the time to try another shoot this weekend and see what I can come up with as far as lighting. I certainly want to go into this with the best resource photo/pose/lighting that I can have.

By the way, I just returned from the museum and took a few photo's of the Raeburn painting.

Marvin Mattelson 06-11-2004 04:43 PM

Awesome!

Linda Brandon 06-11-2004 10:09 PM

Mike, two quick points:

- Your photo has the perfect Raeburnesque nose highlights - long vertical sweep on the edge in the light, then a definite bridge before it goes into shadow on the other side. Notice the difference between that bone highlight and the highlight on the softer nose tip, which is cartilage. I love how Raeburn gets those deft strokes in there. He always strikes me as an artist who took joy in his work.

- Bill Whitaker told our class to try and get both inside eye corners in the light, while still getting a (narrow) nose shadow. It seems to me that on most faces this in itself ought to seperate that nose shadow from the cheek shadow.

You're making me want to stop what I'm doing and set up a pose like this, too!

Matthew Severson 06-11-2004 10:57 PM

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Have you ever tried to shoot a model by candle light? (That sounded terribly wrong...) I would assume that many artists of the past did alot of painting by candle light.. Perhaps I'm incorrect.
Matt

Mike Dodson 06-12-2004 10:29 AM

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An attempt last night to shoot an improved photo over what I currently have in photo #2 was unsuccessful. I would move the lighting around to the right to rid myself of the cast shadow of the nose onto the cheek only to lighten the darkeneed side of the face. Once I was able to get close to what I was looking for the pose just wasn't there, at least not as good as what I currently have. I chose to go ahead and incoporate the changes that Mike suggested by lowering the neck-line and taking away some of her body width. I also took Marvin's recommendation of doing something with the cast nose shadow, so I removed it from the cheek and left it just to the left of her nose to give it definition.I really like the look that I have going here (with the suggestions incorporated that I have received so far) but if any of you think I am completely off base please say so.

Linda: Great point comcerning the inside corners of the eyes. I made a value change on the photo but it doesn't seem to show up as much on screen as it does on my printed photo.


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