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Old 10-11-2011, 03:41 PM   #1
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Five Year Old Twins




Marvin convinced me to spend the money and buy some new photography equipment, it started with a zoom lens. Yesterday I had an outdoor shoot of five year old twins, WOW how easy it was to catch these non-stop, will not pose for nothin' all-boy-boys!! Here are some of my favorites
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Old 10-11-2011, 03:43 PM   #2
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two more

One more. by the end of the shoot both boys were covered in mud and in trouble with dad
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Old 10-12-2011, 08:31 PM   #3
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I can see a huge difference in your pics. The lens were worth the investment.
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Old 10-12-2011, 08:36 PM   #4
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I am loving that first reference shot for a painting!
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Old 10-13-2011, 08:13 AM   #5
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I agree Claudemir and Laurel, I too am praying my clients go for number one and commission a painting inst

ead of a drawing, if not a painting I will probably paint it anyways for my own portfolio...
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Old 10-13-2011, 02:31 PM   #6
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Wow, what an amazing improvement! Congragulations. I really like the last pose.
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Old 10-13-2011, 02:32 PM   #7
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I actually I meant pose #4, didn't initially see the ones after that one.
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Old 10-13-2011, 06:22 PM   #8
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Thanks, Mike. BTW really like your paintint currently on your easel of the little girl
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Old 10-13-2011, 08:09 PM   #9
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I vote for numbers 4 & 5. Personally, I think you should do two separate portraits. That way in the future they can each have their own. I like the cropping in # 5 the way it is. I would crop #4 so the heads in both are the same size. I would do this even if they only pay for one painting. This will get you tons of work. Do both even if they decide on drawings. Well done. Nothing like a good lens to make someone feel like an accomplished photographer.
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Old 10-14-2011, 02:35 PM   #10
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Thanks Pat!
Did you get the 55mm-200mm? Does it have the VR?
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