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Old 07-21-2003, 05:29 PM   #11
Kimberly Dow Kimberly Dow is offline
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Michele,

Thank you. I do not know what this painting is for. I guess I would have to say that I am just trying to create a beautiful painting. I wasn't considering my portfolio when I had the idea to paint her.

I like the outside ones better, because of that fabric, I think. Thinking about temperature and all the other details is new to me. I am assuming Tim and Mike are saying I need to have a clear difference between the warm lit side of her and the cool shadowed side. I do not know if I can do that on that porch.
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Old 07-21-2003, 05:55 PM   #12
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I disagree with the advice not to show her belly. Without the belly, she just reads as "fleshy". (Not that there's anything wrong with that.)

I recently exhibited at an art show a painting of a pregnant woman in profile, nude except for a sheet wrapped around her waist. In every way it was similar to many other nudes at the show, except, of course, for the fact that she was pregnant. I had two men tell me that the painting was improper and that I should take it down. (I told them to quit looking at it if it bothered them.) Meanwhile, I had four young women seek me out (two were pushing strollers) and tell me that they were thrilled to see that an artist found a pregnant woman beautiful.

Would I put put this subject on a portrait website? Probably not. Will painting this subject get you portrait commissions? Again, probably not, but you should paint it anyway if you are moved to do so. Keep it around your studio if it turns out well. You never know who will seek you out. Things might "fly" in the West that wouldn't in the South or the East.

Personally, I am asked to paint many subjects that don't make it onto my portrait website. I feel that they help me grow as an artist.

Don't lose your Texan enthusiasm.

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Old 07-21-2003, 06:01 PM   #13
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Your friend seems pretty gutsy. You should ask her to do this portrait as a nude. She just might like the idea. Of course, you couldn't post the results here for critique (forum policy), but it could make a satisfying painting.

Go to the library and get a copy of Richard Schmid Paints the Figure. Many of the nudes in this book were so tastefully modest that my wife volunteered to pose for a nude after seeing the book.

Could make an excellent non-traditional portrait.
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Old 07-21-2003, 06:02 PM   #14
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I like Michele's post, and agree with the others regarding the bare belly. The suggestion of the belly would be just as effective.

I like the position of the head in the outdoor shot. The indoor head position is not very flattering around her chin. The outside pose shows her to be much more attractive.

What kind of camera and film are you using?

I always like to see what the image looks like without the background noise, reduce it to it's simplist form, for reference sake. Here's another rendition to complicate your mission.

I think you're doing pretty good for your first attempt!
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Old 07-21-2003, 06:02 PM   #15
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Oops. Linda and I were posting at the same time. Great minds think alike.
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Old 07-21-2003, 06:45 PM   #16
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To clarify, I'd paint her nude or clothed. For me, the belly hanging out of the cloth is a bit exhibitionistic ... shades of (forgive me here) Odd Nerdrum.

Ann Ghetts (?) has done some neat clothed shots of expectant mothers that are most clearly expectant, not fleshy. You'll manage. Outside place a cool cloth around the figure (on the shadow side) to block the warm light rays. Leave the light source alone.
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Old 07-22-2003, 01:27 AM   #17
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Thanks for all the input everyone. I will take more traditional poses of others for my portfolio, I started with this one as my first experiment because I wanted to get her while she was pregnant and she is due very soon.

Linda,

"YeeeHaww" Can I see that nude you did of the pregnant woman? Email? I agree with the fact that I want to show the belly. That is the whole purpose of this painting for me. Her hands and face are secondary to me. Except, I like the kind of proud look she has on her face with the outside one. I guess I do not know exactly what I want. I am drawn to more ?bold looks I think. She does not necessarily want her face to be instantly recognizable. Not sure what to do about that yet. I am actually not a Texan. Im a Yankee, please keep that quiet to the people down here, they would run me out of town. The South is more conservative than the North, I think anyway. So, it definatly has to be a painting because I want to do it, and that's it.

Jeff,

Already asked her to pose nude. If she did not trust me she would not have shown this much.

Mike,

I am going to reshoot her (if the baby holds off til Friday) to try and be more subtle. I want a painting that says; "Here I am, yah, I'm pregnant, but I'm beautiful." If I can do that and be less startling with the poking out belly I will. I am using a cheap Fuji digital camera. I messed with the options so quickly because I didn't want her to get tired that I still do not know which settings worked. I can see which photos did, but I do not know which ones were taken with which settings. I need to practice on the family and figure that out.

Tim,

Thanks, I think I got the outside lighting tip now. I misunderstood reflected light. I was thinking of the pool reflecting towards her. Ok, Odd Nerdrum! How can you say that? His are dark are disturbing (to me anyway). She is soft and beautiful (to me anyway). The belly is startling in the way it does jump out at you, I agree. I cannot see the comparison except she has some extra skin showing. I am not being argumentative here, I actually want to know.

I think I may read things differently then-the-average-bear booboo because I clearly didn't foresee "Jake" being scary. If I am going to get serious I need to see paintings like most see them. It doesn't mean I wont paint the occasional 'different' one, because I truly like those better, but I need to be able to anticipate people's reactions if I am going to paint what people want for their portraits.

And yes, Michele I have been checking out the SOG painters and seeing the theme with the more classical poses. I guess I am trying to figure out where the line is drawn. When does it cross over to 'different' or 'unusual'. I know where it is for me personally, just not the general art-purchasing public.
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Old 07-22-2003, 01:31 AM   #18
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Uh, sorry for the above novel. Way too much caffeine & eager enthusiam for all I am picking up here.
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Old 07-22-2003, 09:48 AM   #19
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I think this is indeed a beautiful subject (both her face and her belly) and I look forward to seeing it posted here sometime when the painting is finished. As I mentioned, it's probably not a portrait artist portfolio piece but will make a lovely painting for its own sake. Have fun!
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Old 07-22-2003, 02:10 PM   #20
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Thanks Michele!
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