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Old 06-11-2004, 11:05 AM   #18
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Hi Mike,

I'm a fan of the second one.

Certain little things catch my eye, and it might just be me so disregard if they don't strike you the same way. I rounded off her closest shoulder just a bit. On the bottom right I shaved an inch or so off her blouse, and more less completed the "V" neck. She looks a little thinner and streamlined to me. Small matters.
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