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Old 01-01-2003, 11:52 PM   #2
Denise Hall Denise Hall is offline
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Linda,

Your drawing is very strong and the natural soft coloring is very nice. I think rounding out with more shadow toward the back of the arms and legs would help, but it's very nice just the way it is -- sensitive and soft.

I would push the background back a little more, maybe even create a little drama with the sky. The one boy has a pensive expression and that would enhance it.

Remember, I am definitely not one of the pros, but I wanted to congratulate you on a very nice painting. I also like your new one you posted in oil critiques.


Sincerely,
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