The eyes are definitely looking at the same place now, though I would double check the shape of each eye. Changing the direction of the gaze always changes the shapes of the upper and lower eyelids.
I would watch the very saturated greens you have in the lower areas of skin and tone them down a bit.
Looks like a completely different painting than what you started with. I'll bet you find it easier not to have to invent clothing you never saw on her! I would soften the upper edge of the tube top considerably though.
Nice progress!
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