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Old 03-04-2006, 06:46 AM   #1
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Two Italian Princes




Long ago, Dalidaa with her warm voice used to sing "Gigi, l'amoroso"
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Old 03-04-2006, 06:49 AM   #2
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That is the portrait of his brother ...
very close though different, is n't it ?
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Old 03-04-2006, 07:01 AM   #3
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I took the photos in june and had to deliver the portrait for Christmas.
When I met the grandmother in september, she had a hard time to tell which one was Charles and which one was Alexis.
It was easier on the photos tooken at the end of the day, but nearly impossible on those I had taken before lunch.

My little Prince got one of these children's decease, a scarlatina fever. Nothing really serious but his parents was young and worried a lot.

So here are the charming Italian Princes, side by side, on the portrait.

Look at the differences of character. the further one (Charles) is projecting his smile and his personality towards the person he is looking at... and the closest one ( Alexis ) is drinking in to someone's every word.
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Old 03-11-2006, 12:15 PM   #4
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A bit of a lull in the Drawings replies. Perhaps spring fever has folks looking wistfully out their windows at nuances of green and mauve and ocher next to receding snowlines, instead of staring at computer monitors with their 25 million colors, or so. (I
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Hi Cyrille,

I am sorry I missed this last week as well. I agree with Steven; you have a gorgeous drawing and composition, and you certainly captured the life, joy, and subtle individuality in your very handsome twin subjects. This was no easy accomplishment that you did so well.

I also echo Steven that something significant seems missing and flattened in the extremely pale tonality of their countenances. I also suspect it's your photograph presented here that washes out all the highest values. I copied your photo into Photoshop to have a better look at it, and have detected there is a lot of subtle modeling of forms in very high key values, that became lost when you photographed this. Please, is there any way you can re-photograph this to better capture all the range of values? Your drawing is worth a closer look.

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Old 03-11-2006, 02:53 PM   #6
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I ditto both Steve and Garth.

Your expertise in displaying the subtle differences in the boys is captivating and well done. One seems to project while the other soaks up.

I also would like to add that I have some experience in manipulating a drawing in photoshop to retain the true valoes (true as possible) by adjusting the brightness/contrast as well as other simple maneuvers.

I hope too that you have access to photoshop so you can present your fine work accurately (and also so we can see it).
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Old 03-11-2006, 03:12 PM   #7
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Handsome men with flowers and diamonds flowing out of their lips

I understand why there are so many ladies addict to "portraitartist" ...

I was surprised not to have a single comment...
days passing by, I thought this drawing was perhap's not worth it ....

But comments seem to be like French cheeses or Bordeaux wines,
the more you wait, the better they are

Next time, I 'll wait with more pleasure each day, more pride too ...
So thanks to you two..

There was no light that day. A kind of june luminous but cloudy day, no direct sun. The kids had really black hair, a shiny metallic black like a crow, and very delicate white skin... just Italian Princes !

I lost the original Ektachrome (how do you call that ? a 4x5" slide ?)
so I scanned an invitation card printed from that slide...
So I lost the lightest value at least twice...

and on my scan there was HB strokes on the cheeks and didn't like them so I changed the contrast to hide them a bit... yes shame on me
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