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David and Robert
Please review David and Robert. Any comments or critiques are welcome. This is a commission that I will be delivering soon. Again, my reference material was a candid snapshot
I'm going to try critiquing myself based on what I have learned here so far. First, Robert's face (little boy) definately shows that the source material was taken with a flash. This could have been done better.
Second, the figures look as though they are pasted on to the background. This is a combination of three different photos and my imagination. There is too much tree and activity. I also managed to split the portrait in half by adding a strong vertical element. Also the background needed to be toned down. In trying to create energy and excitement, I've taken away from the most important figures, Dad and his son.
Okay, now TEETH. Robert has a big smile and looks like this most of the time. The client saw this recently and got all teary eyed so they will be pleased. But, Robert and David also read together daily. This could have been an outstanding portrait . I will keep all of these points in mind in the future.
My point is---reference material! I will strive for better material especially as I venture into oils. Thank you, Jean.
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