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Denise,
Beautiful girl. I especially like her long and elegant neck. I agree with Mike on this one. I would omit the window frame altogether. I think I would reshoot this with her standing further away from the window so that you get the light, but she is not so close to the window. It would also help if she didn't wear the fashionable light lipstick in future pictures. I think it will be easier to see the color of her mouth without the light lipstick and a more natural lip color will better stand the test of time.
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