[Patricia Joyce]

I am so excited about my youngest son, a distinguished member of the Coast Guard, getting married to a lovely woman this Satuday. As is the tradition in my family, I have created a portrait for their wedding gift which will be on display Saturday. Here is the quasi-finished painting. My question, is there anything glaringly wrong with the painting that could be easily altered in one day, tomorrow! I know the clothes are not finished, there is no detail and it will have to be painted after the wedding. But in a pretty frame it is not too noticeable???!!!

Thanks for looking. Hillary''s face is angled a bit differently from the reference photo because she is self conscious about her chin, so I made slight adjustments changing the "look" of the angle. Family members who know her say it still looks like her. I hope her mom thinks so!!