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Steven, thanks for your thoughtful post. I read it several times before picking up my pencil (or my eraser). Attached is the drawing with the slight tweeks I made in response to your critique. I believe I addressed every point you made, however subtle it was. I hope that the photo of this very delicate drawing will show it off well, but I don't think it really does. I wonder if you'll even be able to see the changes I made....Regardless, the drawing itself has improved. Thank you!
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