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Dianne, I think you have something here. I think You have separated the big shapes quite nicely but I do have some things that bother me personally. First thing that I would check is the length of the philtrum or is it that the top lip is placed to low? The tip of the nose and the separation of values, in the tip area, makes the nose seem out of balance, like it is being puled up to one side.
Also, I think you could open her left eye a touch more and the light by the brow of the same eye is a bit to strong.
all the best to you
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