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Matthew,
You have come a long way with this drawing, maybe even longer than you had to go.
I like the landscape and the grouping of flowers around the girl, there are such good variation and energy in the drawing of edges, lost and found, soft and hard. But it seems as you work more freely with the less important parts than with the face ( that's quite normal for most of us).
Beside the suggestions from Mischa I have two suggestions for you: Her left shoulder ( at the right ) looks to high when I compare with the neckline, and the bouquet she holds could need some cast shadow to bring it forward.
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