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Old 10-08-2007, 02:11 PM   #6
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Julie, it is a nice friendly looking vignette and I think it should serve you well as a portfolio addition, especially after cropping it a bit as Alexandra suggested.

What I noticed is the shadow on the girl's right cheeck and neck. To make that area recede I would add a bit of grey and tone it down. I find it too chromatic the way I see it on my screen.
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