Margaret, it is very difficult to help you decide when to declare this piece finished.
The work is so personal, and reveals an intense, almost feverish activity on the paper which makes it interesting and captivating.
If you'll be adding more marks, personally I would like to see more structure in the shoulders, which are less solid compared to the strong volume of the head.
Does this photo take in all of the paper? I think that the drawing would benefit from a little more space around it, especially above the head.
Thomasin I saw the Munch exhibition at the Royal Academy a couple of years ago, a real treat
Ilaria
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