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Old 05-13-2007, 07:03 PM   #6
Christy Talbott Christy Talbott is offline
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Originally Posted by Allan Rahbek
Hi Christy,
However, I think that you should do something more with the brim of the water. It looks much the same from foreground to the far back. This diagonal is the most prominent perspective indication in the picture, so I think that you should indicate distance by all means! Make it more off focus behind her and more bluish and less contrasty as it recedes out in the back.
Thank you Allen! Yes, I think you are exactly right! It seems i should have known that, but it didn't appear that way in my reference. It's fairly glaring at me now! Fortunately I'll be going back to the home where it resides now and will be able to make that adjustment.

Christy
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