Thank you for the closeups. Two thing that stick and both in the older girls facial features. I am sure that the outline below the nose her lips and chin need some adjusting. Second the neck of the older girl has to many value changes or should I say detail. I would suggest you just have a light and shadow are no detail of tendons and such things, only a indication of cylindrical form.
As the saying gos it is finished when you say it is finished.
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