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Ok, if I understood correctly, you do not have much time with this. Alex is absolutely right to be able to critique the girls one must have some closeups. Now, being that this is as it is, these are my suggestions. The center of attention, the girls you have defined quite well. The setting needs some adjusting. The brick wall and the steps for now look good but most things behind the girls could diminish in focus, value and temperature. As is there are elements that suggest that the house is at a distance but other elements like the walk suggest that this is not so. A sort of conflict between is and isn't.
If by chance, what I say is not that clear and this is quite possible, please say so. Otherwise wish you all the best
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