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A thought
Margaret, you have a lovely subject and I like your approach. As per your suggestion I have indicated some areas that I believe need some attention. The areas I indicate give thought to value or temperature. Her the elision of form is not adequately conveyed. I also believe that better form to the forehead can be conveyed. One more thing I have placed arrows where it seems that a better representation of depth can be suggested.
I hope I was able to help
All the best to you
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