David,
Both are beautiful. Though you've progressed, I can see the beginnings of your particular vision in the first drawing. Both show your sincerity, insightfulness, and appreciation of the person you are drawing. Yes, she's a very attractive young woman, but she's not just a pretty face. You can see into her eyes and get a feeling for who she is. I feel the same way about your drawings of your students. Now I can't wait to see the painting!
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