[Janel Maples]

Thank you Terri,

I am attaching another photo that I liked as much, if not more, than the first one but I couldn't get the spiral to hit her eye and have the curve fit with the flow of her arms as well. I do have a composition with this one (cropped) where the third line hits both of her hands and her gaze in in the corner of the third cross. The other third follows her left arm and crosses at her belly button (which I thought was fun) I could post that train of thought if anyone was interested.

This photo, you will notice is not an original photo. I took her head from the other photo and attached it to this body. And now that I look at what I posted, I see that this isn't the creation I ended up with because I also added a cool "tail" that was from another photo on the top corner of the veil. Minor point though.

I agree with you that the arms are questionable in the first one and my solution to that was to bring her back to re-shoot because the lower arm has an odd look to it and I couldn't really figure out what it was doing. I should have mentioned that I was troubled with it as well, but was more concerned that I was doing the Golden Mean thing properly.

I will be doing this painting as a combination painting from life and photo so I have options available to me.

I like the second photo (creation) because it includes the veil and her hands, but it would end up being a large painting if I wanted to paint just under life size, which is what I like to do. I like the first photo because it centers on her face more and would be a smaller painting in the end. Not to forget the spiral fit right where I wanted.

I'll be interested in reading what you have to say now.

: )

Thanks in advance.