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Patrick,
I see some really refreshingly original thinking here. I do love the dripping paint over the body. The composition works for me.
The problem as I see it is an issue of drawing, anatomy and lifeless skin-tones. Her lower wing bone or hollow for one, is way too light for the position it is in.
Your painting would work better as a whole if you were to address yourself to some serious study from life. The color and the painting style are all to common to those who learn and paint only from photographs.
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