Hi Jerome--
I agree with the comments above. . . this piece has a whole lot going for it! You might also want to look for bone/structural high points and shapes around his wrists especially to give more of a clue to what position his hands are really in. The interlaced fingers read well . . . but the wrists and elbows are lost. . . I'm thinking we should be seeing some structure at both (the wrists directly. . . the elbows impacting the folds of the fabric)
Very nice so far!!
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