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Sorry if I was demanding, Ilaria. The closeups are worth it, though. Thank you so much for describing your thought processes. It is fascinating to me to hear what you go though when you are weighing all the factors (composition, color, etc) and designing the painting. Your concept comes across clearly, yet it is not easy to put into words all the subtleties you have considered. I really admire your work.
The only things I see at this point are: 1) the seated girl's forearm shape seems slightly off, along with the articulation of her hand and wrist; and 2) the crease of her pants at the knee seems to go too far forward into her knee, making her kneecap too narrow--but these are things you probably already know.
This painting really excites me! I think it's going to be one of your best.
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