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Old 07-27-2002, 06:55 PM   #9
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Alicia,

I would soften the eyebrows and eliminate the shadow above the brow on our right. This should reduce the worried look.

The blue flower furthest to our right looks as though it rests on her neck and the leaves/mulch on the right looks like a brown spot of some sort. I don't think you need it.

All in all, a good painting.
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