[Monique McFarland]

Here is the larger composition, straightened out...I don't want to crop the white edges out because I want to keep the view and will adlib the missing parts...I don't care for the seam in the floor either...and will do away with some of the other distractions (something on the bar on the right side...but the light and shadows on the right wall there do add some interesting things to this. Windows are necessary because of being the light source for the lighting effects on her. Is this correct or is there just not enough light on her to warrant the window on the right wall? the left side window is imperative, right? or should that distraction be eliminated also? There is only a hint of it anyway. I could crop it off where the bar mounts to the boards on the wall...it could end there and have the inference of the window only come from the light and shadow on the right wall.

Did this paragraph just make sense?