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Just one little bit to add
Hi ReNae,
I think this is lovely, you have gotten so much wonderful help from Steven, I couldn't begin to add anything to his critique, except for one little thing. Oh, I learned a lot from Steven's critique too!
You might consider toning down the brown part of the scarf. The dark object of the scarf against the pink shirt really jumps out at me. Could you make the entire scarf yellow? Or just neutralize the brown part of the scarf so the contrast between it and it's background (shirt) is not so high.
Just my two cents worth,
Joan
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