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Sandra,
I'm so glad you posted this painting. It is so rich in color and texture, and you've managed to capture your friend in a way that not only tells the viewer about her, it also makes a memorable image.
I want to address the issue of wanting to fill up the canvas, or, putting it another way, worrying that there is too much empty space. You've got so much going on between your very striking subject, sparkling objects and jewelry, colors and lively background, that you don't need to worry about leaving "empty" space. In this painting I am speaking specifically about the calla lilies. I think there are too many, and they are all in similar groupings. You could probably get by with the one group to the left towards the back, eliminating the other two. I like Sharon's suggestion of changing her hand and putting a scarf in it or something. (This would also give you the opportunity to try a more natural hand position.) I find the lilies in the foreground annoying because they block my view of Marianne.
Empty space can be good! It can be strong! Don't doubt its power! Being selective about what you put in will focus the attention on the figure.
Alex
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