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Kimberly Dow · 09-30-2005, 06:20 AM

Tricia,

I know this is a very personal and important subject to you, and I think you've done a fine job.

I think that highlight on his darker cheek is too bright. The shadow underneath seems like it has such a strong line as well. I would also soften both the hairlines.

I want to see the bookcover when you both are done.

09-30-2005, 06:20 AM	#2
Kimberly Dow Juried Member FT Professional Joined: Jul 2003 Location: Corpus Christi, TX Posts: 1,713	Tricia, I know this is a very personal and important subject to you, and I think you've done a fine job. I think that highlight on his darker cheek is too bright. The shadow underneath seems like it has such a strong line as well. I would also soften both the hairlines. I want to see the bookcover when you both are done. __________________ Kim http://kimberlydow.com "Speak your mind, even if your voice shakes." - Maggie Kuhn "If you obey all the rules, you'll miss all the fun." - Katherine Hepburn