Ngaire, Thanks! It was stressful to re-do... really am just glad to be done with it (again!). . . it took me three times as long this time around compared to the first. (Probably 'over-thought' it a little bit whereas the first time around was just going with the flow. . .)
Thanks Carol!

My kids laugh at me because I tear up at the drop of a hat... movies... even commercials that strike a chord (these days, anything about kids growing up). You're reaction makes me feel like this communicates what I was wanting to convey. Thanks!
Denise --thanks so much!