I find this really interesting. I too like the ponytail pulling. ( perhaps it is a girl thing).
I find the fourth figure on the right rather dead.
The central figure seems to be relating to the fourth figure, so perhaps if you had her responding to the hair pulling action by having her hand to her mouth stiffling a giggle in response.?
Perhaps even bending over a little. she seems to have no movement about her like the rest of the girls.
Of course, I have no idea how this may effect the composition.
Compostition is a mystery to me.
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