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Old 04-19-2005, 10:40 AM   #5
Cindy Procious Cindy Procious is offline
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Originally Posted by Judson Eneas
This is one of my better paintings. What critique can you give of this?
Alright, Judson. Now we're getting there.

This is a very delicate handling of your subject. Nicely rendered careful drawing, and sensitive touches with the darks. You have a tendency to overstate the darks and the transitions in your work - I don't see that in this piece (except maybe a tiny bit around her mouth...).

I like how you observe the planes of the figure. Your style is evolving into something very pleasing - if you keep after this - you will definitely mature into a solid figurative painter. I don't think you want to strive for traditional portraiture - rather, pursue this unique style that almost approaches impressionism. (In that, I mean that you paint flat shapes that when put together, create the depth. Almost like a puzzle.)

Good job! I like this very much.
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