Allan and Rob,
Thank you very much for taking time to critique. I'm making notes for myself.
The problem with light here is mainly caused by very bad lighting situation in this open studio - they have fluorescent over head lighting and several sources of direct light on a model in the same time. Sometimes you get more light on a head than on a body etc... I'm not happy about it, but others don't care as it does not affect non-realist representation as much
I'm not planning to work on it more and consider this a lesson learned. It was my first experience with long poses and I had no idea what it takes to get it to more or less finished state under the time constraint , so simply rushed through.
Best regards,
Maria