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Old 12-16-2004, 11:42 AM   #2
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Hi Piety,

I like your self-portrait, it has a very introspective feel to it. Who is the image of in the background? Are the whites and darks accurately represented in your photo? It's a hard to judge with the dark stripe across the top and the yellowish tint of the photo. I think that softening the edge of shoulder on the left and darkening/adding some modeling to the shirt (particularly the lower left area of your photo) would help bring more attention to your face.

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Holly
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