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Hi John,
I'm blown away by the progress you've made in the last year and a half. This is a very fine painting and I'm glad to see your clients were thrilled to receive this.
If I had to change one thing, I feel the diploma is too light and therefore comes too far forward, even though in reality it is white. I would have lowered the value of the white and added a trace of the wallpaper color to pull it back. I would have grayed down the blue mat as well. Just nitpicking really, but you asked.
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