[Chris Saper]

Dear Ant,

Here's what strikes me in this portrait regarding the color. I think that perhaps too many of the colors in the clothing and ribbon are highly and equally saturated. There are a couple of things you might consider. First, choose a color harmony, then desaturate with complements everything else. Particularly desaturating some of the light areas of clothing with skin color will help integrate the face and clothing. Desaturating color in the ribbon and medal, as well as softening some of the edges will help the focal point remain on the girl's face.

Congratulations of this wonderful commission, I am sure the family will be thrilled!