Steven,
Very nice drawing, nice handling of line, some of the best line quality I've seen on this site.
You might have a look at your portrait. The mouth seems to be a little too far to (our) right. Draw a line straight down from the columella, the center of the nose between the nostrils, to the center of the chin. The furrow, cupid's bow, the center of the lower lip and ball of the chin should all line up equally on both sides.
Peggy
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