This is another intense one, Jimmie. Such eyes! And nobody draws hair quite like you do. I have long hair and I may have to hire you to draw me just so you can give me this "wild babe" look. (But no Playboy T-shirt.)
This may just be my bad monitor, but the groove along her nostril on the left side looks like a dark line to me.
Do you intend to use this as a portfolio piece to showcase your portraiture skills? If you are, then I'd take out or soften those bags under the eyes. If not, I'd leave them in.
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