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Old 07-05-2004, 05:22 PM   #11
Sharon Knettell Sharon Knettell is offline
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She just glows Michelle.

If it is not too late, I would adumbrate (my favorite word lately) the base of the column, lose it. It takes away from that charming child.

I think Marvin was right on about the bouquet, and playing down the column. I would also lose the tips of the floral bouquet into the column more. Just teeny bits and pieces of observations.

Otherwise, go forth proudly and collect the check!
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