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Hi Joan,
Here is my opinion.
I also like the standing one, because of the fine dress and the colors of the light on it.
But I think that the hair on her left shoulder makes her look like she is hiding herself, it should be back. Her hands form a too closed figure, maybe try with other positions of the hands. And her upper body should be seen more frontal like in the one with the chair ( my other favorite )
Finally I think that the yellow light on her face should be less hard.
Allan
Ps. Would it be possible to do something with the dress to make her bosom look more natural? I am a foreigner, so maybe this request should have had another form ? Please remove it if i said something wrong.
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