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Old 04-14-2002, 06:02 PM   #5
Peter Jochems Peter Jochems is offline
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Hi,

Just one compositional comment, the line of the inside corner of the chair only 'touches' her hair on the (for us) left side. Perhaps making the hair on the left side broader so it overlaps that line a bit more will make the composition a little more harmonic.

Peter
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