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I made the photograph lighter and then you can see that the contour of the neck was drawn by Joseph just a little too much to the left. If the contour of the neck was replaced a little to the right and perhaps the contour of the right-side of the face was a little bit adjusted (on the right side of her chin the contour seems a little too round) The placing of the head on the neck would appear more stable I think. Also the contour of her forehead could be a little bit adjusted.
Maybe the contour of the hair is a little too round too on the top of her head (towards the left)
Greetings,
Peter
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