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Steven,
Once again, many thanks for your critique. I am always helped by your observations and suggestions.
The hair was difficult for me. Her hair does tend to fall in distinct locks, but my attempt to render it made it look like she was wearing a mop. I did attempt to correct that, but not very successfully.
Drawing on colored paper is a new departure for me. I was inspired to try it by the amazing drawings Jimmie Arroyo has been producing.
Unfortunately, I had sprayed the drawing with fixative before I read your critique, so I am unable to implement many of your suggestions.
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