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Old 04-11-2002, 03:40 AM   #5
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Reshooting that helped a lot, Joseph, but there's still a bit of a gooseneck to the right. However, just hold your finger up to cover that vertical stripe of near-black shadow on the right (viewer's) side of the neck, so your mind automatically makes the neck wider, and instantly everything drops into place. I think you need to substantially lighten that shadow stripe, in order to optically get the neck over "under" the head.
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