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Henry Wienhold · 05-17-2004, 12:01 AM

Barbara the dark background is a good improvement and the shoulder is not as obvious as before. To me the whole composition looks more unified and complete. I think you've done a good job with the improvements that you have made here, but I have to agree with Garth. You might want to add some light into your background in places making it a little less solid in appearance creating a more atmospheric look to the composition, but keep it darker in value by that shoulder area, Good job!

Henry

05-17-2004, 12:01 AM	#3
Henry Wienhold Juried Member FT Professional Joined: Oct 2001 Location: Cleveland, Ohio Posts: 82	Barbara the dark background is a good improvement and the shoulder is not as obvious as before. To me the whole composition looks more unified and complete. I think you've done a good job with the improvements that you have made here, but I have to agree with Garth. You might want to add some light into your background in places making it a little less solid in appearance creating a more atmospheric look to the composition, but keep it darker in value by that shoulder area, Good job! Henry __________________ www.wienholdportraits-fineart.com