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Hi Terri,
I don't have anything to add about the faces; they should be pleased with their likeness.
On the overall painting, one thing that bothers me is the man's suit sleeve. The it seems to draw much more attention than the sleeve in the reference, pulling attention away from the faces. Once my attention is drawn to it, the way the folds are modelled makes it look like much thicker material than the suit appears at the lapel and wrist.
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