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Nice drawing, but it seems to have the same difficulties as your last one, before the changes you made.
The shadows are not nearly dark enough to give a sense that the form is turning. In the drawing you have the halftones on the near side of the face at almost the same value as the very strong shadows on the far side of the face and in the reference they are not close in value at all. The shadows on the left should be several steps down the value scale.
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